The Serial Murders

Creative Writing

In a school, there were three boys and a girl. Their names were Ken, Micky, Clara, and Richard. They had already been friends for two years and they had been through many experiences. They had same hobby and dream. They wanted to be a detective. So that, they entered in the school’s detective. The headmaster in their school was a man. He was Mr. Daniel. He usually called Mr. Dan. Mr. Dan was very nice to them. He has considered them as his children. Mr dan has an assitant. His assistant was Mr. Boy. Mr. Boy used to follow ken and friends whereever they solving the crime, because in many cases, there were vey strange. The culprits in every crimes always lost their consciousness. Mr. Dan and Mr. Boy had suspected who was behind in many crimes, but they did not told to Ken and friends yet.

One day, there was a crime. it was began 10 years ago. It was related with Micky’s father death. Until now, he did not know behind his father’s death.

“Oi, Ken,” asked Clara.

“Morning, where is Micky?” asked Ken.

“I don’t know,” said Richard “it is very strange, he already 8 days not come to here.”

When they were talking about Micky, Mr. Dan and Mr. Boy came to their room.

“Students, I have a case,” Said Mr. Dan

Mr. Dan showed that there was a letter sent to their school. It contained about murderer 10 years ago. It was about Micky’s father death. In that letter, the crime took place in a villa. The villa was belong to Micky. Ken and others did not know about Micky’s father. Micky never told them about his family. There was a secret about his family.

“Class,” said Mr. Dan “I hope all of you can solving this crime.”

“Yes” they said.

“Be careful, maybe this case more dangerous than before.” Said Mr. Dan.

They were went to that villa. Before they went, Mr. Dan called Ken.

“Ken, wait a moment please,” said Mr. Dan.

“Ya, what’s wrong Mr. Dan,” asked Ken.

“I hope you will always believe to Micky until end,” said Mr. Dan.

“Yes,” said Ken, as he was very confused why Mr. Dan spoke like that.

In other side, Micky was thinking about his father. He was often dreamed about his father. He saw his father committed suicide with hanged himself. it happened when Micky was seven years old. He want to solve behind the suicide of his father. Micky invited his father’s friend to come to that villa. They were worked together in same company. He thought, perhaps his father’s friend knew the clue why his father committed suicide.

In that villa, there were 2 men and 2 women. They were friends of Micky’s father. Their name were Mr. Kevin, Ms. Diana, Mr. Ronald and his wife was Mrs. Alicia. They looked in front of Micky very nice, but behind Micky, they worried that Micky would know what happened 10 years ago.

“Welcome to our villa,” said Micky.

“Thank you, you are Micky right?” asked Mr. Kevin.

“That’s right, I am Micky,”

“Well, you had grown up and you are very handsome same with your father,” said Ms. Diana.

“Thank you.”

Not long after that, Ken and friends came the to guest room.

“Micky,” Clara said “Where have you been?”

“Thank you guys, you have cone to my villa,” said Micky.

“We just know, if you have a big villa,” said Richard.

“Micky, are you all right?” asked Ken.

“Ya, I am very great,” said Micky.

“Thank God,” said Clara.

“You are very tired, right?” asked Micky “it is better to you rest in the room that be prepared.”

Ken felt there was something about Micky that he did not know. Ken asked to Micky, if there was something that bothered Micky, Micky could told that to Ken. Until now, Micky did not told yet.

In the room, Mr. Kevin, Ms. Diana, Mr. Ronald and Mrs. Alicia were busy talking about their worried. How if Micky knew the truth behind his father’s death.

“What should we do?” asked Mrs Alicia.

“Are you afraid honey?” said Mr. Kevin, while his arm embraced diana’s shoulder

“Take your hand away from me,” said Ms. Diana with angry.

“Kevin,” said Mr. Ronald

“okay, so must we kill him?” said Mr. Kevin.

“What? Don’t be reckless, in this villa there are his friends. They will suspect us if there is something happen to him,” said Mr. Ronald.

“But, he invites us to know what happened in his father’s death. It is very dangerous for us,” said Mrs Alicia

“Why suddenly he want to know about that, maybe he is suspecting us now?” asked Ms. Diana.

“it is impossible, nobody knows what happened 10 years ago,” said Mr. Ronald “Until whenever he will not know that his father not committed suicide, but killed by us.”

In the night, Clara went out to the kitchen. She saw Mr. Ronald and ms. Diana were talking. She heard that Ms. Diana threaten him. Ms. Diana did not let Mr. Ronald wherever. Mr. Ronald inadvertently hit Diana and her lover. her lover died, Diana safe but her feet was limp. After Ms. Diana went, Mrs. Alicia came near to her husband. Clara more shocked when she heard about their talking.

“Why she always threaten you, honey?” said Mrs. Alicia.

“it is all right, don’t worry,” said Mr. Ronald.

“Why don’t we kill her, she is very disturbing us,”

“Alicia, I want to talk about our relationship, I think it can not hep,”

“Try it, but you will not get anything, all inheritance is mine. You can be successful because of me,” said Mrs. Alicia “Don’t talking about it again.”

She left her husband. Clara saw Mr. Ronald’s face. He looked so stressed. He want to divorce to his wife, but he could not and he threaten by Ms. Diana. Ms. Diana asked some money to him. he could not do anything, because if he refused he would be in the prison.

Mr. Kevin was alone in guest room. He was thinking about Micky. He afraid that Micky would be know. Suddenly, he was attacked by someone. When Clara was walking, she saw Micky in the guest room. Micky was looked Mr. Kevin unconscious. Clara never saw Micky’s expression like that. Micky’s eyes looked full of hatred. Then, Micky went out. Clara entered to that room, but Mr. Kevin not unconscious, he was died. Clara screamed, Ken and Richard shocked. They ran to Clara’s voice.

“What’s going on?” asked Richard.

“Mr. Kevin is died,” answered Clara.

All people in that villa also came to that room. They were shocked too.

“This is not accident, but the murder,” said Ken.

The next day, Clara told Ken what she saw in that night. Ken did not believe if Micky had killed Mr. Kevin. Richard suspected perhaps they that invited by Micky there was relation to Micky’s father death. Ken did not accepted if Micky took revenge to his father’s death. The detective polices came to that villa, they were suspected all people in that room. They watched the secret camera that set up in every way. They only looked Mr. Kevin and Micky that entered to the guest room. Clara also told that she saw Micky in venue. When the detective polices asked Micky about that, Micky admitted it. Ken doubt what Micky was saying. Only Micky did not have alibi and all the case showed that Micky was the culprit. Ken suspected there is something wrong. The culprit was not Micky. Perhaps, the culprit one of friend of Micky’s father.

“We should carry you to police office to ask your other explanation,” said the detective police.

“Sir, wait a moment. Micky impossible do that, I believe to Micky,” said ken.

“I know, we only ask him some questions in police office, so all of you can wait in here,” he said “don’t do anything.”

“Micky....,” said ken.

Micky did not speak anything. He followed what the detective police asked.

“Don’t worry, we will solve the case as soon as possible,” said Ken “I believe in you, Micky.”

Micky was carried by the detective police. In the way, Micky suddenly took medicine and unconscious. When the detective polices were panic, Micky ran away for them.

Ken asked to receptionist where Mr. Ronald, Ms. Diana, and Mrs. Alicia. The receptionist told that they came back to their houses. When Ken and friends were ran out, they saw Ms. Diana was took her goods to her car.

“Ms. Diana, where are you going?” asked Richard.

“I will back to my villa. It near from here. Well, it is very unfortunate your friend suspected had killed Mr. Kevin,” said Ms. Diana.

“I believe Micky did not do that,” said Ken.

“ya, so do I,” said Ms. Diana

“What are they?” asked Clara.

“They are thermos bottle. They are my make up, it usual for women bring them anywhere they go,” answered Ms. Diana.

Ms. Diana left that villa. Not long after that, Ken accepted the phone that Micky ran away to the forest. Clara and Richard more suspected that Micky was culprit. They were went to the forest. There was a villa. They entered to that villa. They saw the thermos bottles in the table. the thermos bottles looked familiar with Ms. Diana has. When they arrived in a room, they found Ms. Diana had died. She stabbed by someone. When Richard out from the room, he saw Micky. Richard called him, but Micky ran away. Ken and Clara also out from the room.

“What happened?” asked Clara.

“I see Micky, he just ran away, Micky’s behaviour was very strange,” said Richard.

“No, Micky impossible do that, Richard,” said Ken.

“But why he ran away? Why he always in the crime’s place, Ken.. can you explain this all?” said Richard.

“Richard is true. Why he must ran? Why he does not tell us?” asked Clara.

“I am thinking about that, maybe Micky has some reasons why he ran away. We just only wait until he tell us. We must believe in him guys,” said Ken.

Ken ran to chase Micky. In the forest, they found Mrs. Alicia’s corpse. They found the knife in near Mrs. Alicia’s corpse. Ken felt there is very strange. What did Mrs. Diana do in the forest and why there was a knife beside her. Ken got something. There was left over one person. he was Mr. Ronald. Ken, Clara, and Richard came to Mr. Ronald’s apartment. In there, Mr. Ronald was very surprised that Micky’s friend came to his apartment.

“What do you want to come to my apartment?” asked Mr. Ronald.

“Mr. Kevin, Ms. Diana, and Mrs. Alicia.. they all have die,” said Ken.

“What? My wife has die? Don’t joking children,” said Mr. Ronald.

“Do you want to divorce with your wife, but she refused?” asked Clara “ and I know, you felt disturbed by Ms. Diana, because she often threaten you, right?”

“and I ever heard you have fight with Mr. Kevin in the toilet. Both of you talking about the profit in your company. So, you have reasons to kill them,” said Richard.

“Wait, you can not decide I am a culprit just your own analysis,” said Mr. Ronald “What your proof about that?”

“Maybe, you have throw all proof,” said Ken “you know my friend have suspect because of that.”

“Micky? Aah, he also has a motive to kill us,” said Mr. Ronald.

“What do you mean?” asked Clara.

Mr. Ronald was silent. He made a cup of coffee. “he also has a motive, because we had killed her father, no, but make her father to committed suicide” said Mr. Ronald. After he drunk it, he excuse to the toilet. In toilet, he did not out. Ken knocked out, but not answered. Perhaps, Mr. Ronald had ran away from us. When Ken and Richard would checked out, Mr. Ronald out from the toilet. He fell to Clara. Clara screamed.

“Oi, Old man that have not shame,” said Richard.

Mr. Ronald fell to his chair. His face looked red, and his mouth remove the foam like poisoning. Ken checked the pack of coffee. Ken found there were some feather. He remembered that Mr. Kevin had told Micky that feather in the guest room are poison. Only Ken and Micky knew about that. Ken was confused what’s on earth was going now. Why all that showed that Micky was culprit. The people that suspected by Ken had died. There was left over. He was Micky. Ken must asked Micky.

Micky hidden in a place. In there, his grandfather met him. his name was Mr. Carlos

“Grandfa, what are you doing in here?” asked Micky.

“to meet you, now you know your friends have avoid you, they don’t believe you Micky,” said Mr. Carlos.

“What should I do Grandpa?” said Micky.

“Avoid them and back to home, they also avoid you,” said Mr. Carlos.

His grandpa began to hypnotize Micky.

“come here my grandchild,” said Mr. Carlos.

Micky came near to his grandfather and hug him.

“I am sorry grandpa, now I will follow all what you want,” said Micky.

The next day, Ken accepted a message from Micky. Micky invited them to come to villa. Ken, Clara, and Richard met Micky in the guest room. Micky had already came, but he came with Mr.Carlos.

“Micky, who is he?” asked Clara.

“Mr. Carlos,” said Richard.

“Why do you know him, Richard?” asked Clara.

“I have been know him for long days.. he well-known with his hypnotize,” said Richard.

“Hypnotyze?” said Clara.

Ken smiled to Micky.

“Micky, where have you been?” asked Ken.

“I have decide to avoid you, I will back to my house,” said Micky

“Oi, what do you mean?” said Richard.

 “You know about legend concerning of this room?” asked Mr. Carlos.

“if you open the dog and snail doors in the same time, you can touch the imperial wrath of the dragon” said Mr. Carlos “this is trap that was set by Micky’s father. When both doors of this hall opened, the moment they’re closed once again. The trap will be activated.”

Micky and Mr. Carlos closed the doors in the same time. Suddenly, the clock in that room did no stable.

“Micky..,” they said.

“If you open the wrong door, this Villa will be enveloped in fire,” said Micky “Ken, would you try to open this snail door? It is the best if you don’t. At the moment you open it, all of you will be covered in flames, will you believe my words? you have 3 minutes.”

“Oi, Micky.. wait,” said Richard.

 “What should we do Ken,” said Clara.

Suddenly, Ken saw liquid in that floor. He remembered that liquid same with the glass decoration in that room. That liquid also same with that liquid in the thermos bottles’s Ms. Diana.

“I know the truth behind all of the Serial Murders,” said Ken.

“What?” said Richard.

Mr. Carlos was bothered why Micky gave the clue to them. Micky said, perhaps they did not believe what he said. They saw there was smoke in that villa.

“Maybe, they are open the wrong door,” said Micky.

“Ya, Micky I am so happy yo back to your house,” said Mr. Carlos.

“Ya grandpa,” said Micky.

In Micky’s house, Micky accepted a message that the villa was very well. What happened, why all this was all right. They came back to that villa. The went to the guest room. After they entered, Ken and others also entered.

“Micky, thank you,” said Ken.

“oh, I also thank you for believe in me,” said Micky.

“Micky, What’s wrong?” asked Mr. Carlos.

“You thought that I was Hypnotized by you, but you are wrong. I have learn to against your hypnotized in my mind,” said Micky “I believe in Ken, he don’t break his promise to believe to me.”

“we already know behind the serial murders,” said Ken.

Ken and the others explain that. The first crime, Mr. Kevin was victim. He died because he was killed by Ms. Diana. The proof was that liquid in that floor and also because that, Ken and friends knew which door that true to open. That smell of liquid in that floor same with Ms. Diana’s has, and same with glass decoration that before in front of the dog door. So that, they knew the dog door that the wrong door to be opened.

The second crime, Ms. Diana was a victim. She murdered by Mrs. Alicia. The proof was a knife in near Mrs. Alicia body. The blood in that knife same with the Ms. Diana’s blood, and Mrs. Alicia’ fingerprint had found. The reason why Mrs. Alicia killed Ms. Diana, because Mrs. Alicia did not want Ms. Diana used to disturbing her relationship with her husband. Unfortunately, she also died in forest.

The third crime, Mrs Alicia was a victim. She killed by her husband. The proof that Mr. Ronald was confessed that he killed her wife. He tired always curbed by his wife. The other proof that his wedding ring fell to Mrs. Alicia shirt.

The fourth crime, Mr. Ronald was a victim. In this case, firstly, Ken and the others did not know, because all people had died. One left person was Micky. Apparently, Mr Kevin killed Mr. Ronald. the proof was the feather in pack of coffee. Mr. Ronald perhaps had known Mr. Ronald’s hobby. Drinking a coffee. So that, Mr. Kevin could put the feather in that pack of coffee.

All the crimes that happened were killed each other. This serial murders were plans by Mr. Carlos. Mr. Carlos was a creator of the crimes. Ken and the others knew from Mr. Boy. Mr. Boy told that Mr. Carlos was Mr. Dan’s friend. A long time ago, he was betrayed by Mr. Dan, because all of his friends said that Mr. Carlos was the culprit’s son. Mr. Dan could not any longer to be friend with Mr. Carlos. Finally, Mr. Carlos followed his parents to be a criminal. He wanted his grandchild, Micky also followed him. unfortunately, Micky always rejected until now.

“grandfa, accept your sin,” said Micky.

“that’s right Mr. Carlos,” said Ken “However, your heart hurt by someone, but it's never too late to change. Maybe your friend had made a mistake, but give him a chance to explain all.”

“Micky you are lucky, you have great friends that is very believed in you,” said Mr. Carlos.

Mr. Dan came to that villa. He asked Ken and Friends to leave that room. He told to Mr. Carlos he was very regretted had avoided Mr. Carlos. He should believe until end to his friend. Mr. Carlos thought, it was too late. He did not accepted his sins in the prison. He took some drugs and died.

Finally, Micky still became part of the School detective with Ken and the others. He started a new life with his friends. They must became a great detectives in the world.