Creative
Writing
In a school, there
were three boys and a girl. Their names were Ken, Micky, Clara, and Richard. They had already been
friends for two years
and they had been through many experiences.
They had same hobby and dream. They wanted to be a detective. So that, they
entered in the school’s detective. The headmaster in their school was a man. He
was Mr. Daniel. He usually called Mr. Dan. Mr. Dan was very nice to them. He
has considered them as his children. Mr dan has an assitant. His assistant was
Mr. Boy. Mr. Boy used to follow ken and friends whereever they solving the
crime, because in many cases, there were vey strange. The culprits in every
crimes always lost their consciousness. Mr. Dan and Mr. Boy had suspected who
was behind in many crimes, but they did not told to Ken and friends yet.
One day, there was
a crime. it was began 10 years ago. It was related with Micky’s father death.
Until now, he did not know behind his father’s death.
“Oi, Ken,” asked
Clara.
“Morning, where is
Micky?” asked Ken.
“I don’t know,”
said Richard “it is very strange, he already 8 days not come to here.”
When they were
talking about Micky, Mr. Dan and Mr. Boy came to their room.
“Students, I have a
case,” Said Mr. Dan
Mr. Dan showed that
there was a letter sent to their school. It contained about murderer 10 years
ago. It was about Micky’s father death. In that letter, the crime took place in
a villa. The villa was belong to Micky. Ken and others did not know about
Micky’s father. Micky never told them about his family. There was a secret
about his family.
“Class,” said Mr.
Dan “I hope all of you can solving this crime.”
“Yes” they said.
“Be careful, maybe
this case more dangerous than before.” Said Mr. Dan.
They were went to
that villa. Before they went, Mr. Dan called Ken.
“Ken, wait a moment
please,” said Mr. Dan.
“Ya, what’s wrong
Mr. Dan,” asked Ken.
“I hope you will
always believe to Micky until end,” said Mr. Dan.
“Yes,” said Ken, as
he was very confused why Mr. Dan spoke like that.
In other side,
Micky was thinking about his father. He was often dreamed about his father. He
saw his father committed suicide with hanged himself. it happened when Micky
was seven years old. He want to solve behind the suicide of his father. Micky
invited his father’s friend to come to that villa. They were worked together in
same company. He thought, perhaps his father’s friend knew the clue why his
father committed suicide.
In that villa,
there were 2 men and 2 women. They were friends of Micky’s father. Their name
were Mr. Kevin, Ms. Diana, Mr. Ronald and his wife was Mrs. Alicia. They looked
in front of Micky very nice, but behind Micky, they worried that Micky would
know what happened 10 years ago.
“Welcome to our
villa,” said Micky.
“Thank you, you are
Micky right?” asked Mr. Kevin.
“That’s right, I am
Micky,”
“Well,
you had grown up and you are very handsome same with your father,” said Ms.
Diana.
“Thank
you.”
Not
long after that, Ken and friends came the to guest room.
“Micky,”
Clara said “Where have you been?”
“Thank
you guys, you have cone to my villa,” said Micky.
“We
just know, if you have a big villa,” said Richard.
“Micky,
are you all right?” asked Ken.
“Ya,
I am very great,” said Micky.
“Thank
God,” said Clara.
“You
are very tired, right?” asked Micky “it is better to you rest in the room that
be prepared.”
Ken
felt there was something about Micky that he did not know. Ken asked to Micky,
if there was something that bothered Micky, Micky could told that to Ken. Until
now, Micky did not told yet.
In
the room, Mr. Kevin, Ms. Diana, Mr. Ronald and Mrs. Alicia were busy talking
about their worried. How if Micky knew the truth behind his father’s death.
“What
should we do?” asked Mrs Alicia.
“Are
you afraid honey?” said Mr. Kevin, while his arm embraced diana’s shoulder
“Take
your hand away from me,” said Ms. Diana with angry.
“Kevin,”
said Mr. Ronald
“okay,
so must we kill him?” said Mr. Kevin.
“What?
Don’t be reckless, in this villa there are his friends. They will suspect us if
there is something happen to him,” said Mr. Ronald.
“But,
he invites us to know what happened in his father’s death. It is very dangerous
for us,” said Mrs Alicia
“Why
suddenly he want to know about that, maybe he is suspecting us now?” asked Ms.
Diana.
“it
is impossible, nobody knows what happened 10 years ago,” said Mr. Ronald “Until
whenever he will not know that his father not committed suicide, but killed by
us.”
In
the night, Clara went out to the kitchen. She saw Mr. Ronald and ms. Diana were
talking. She heard that Ms. Diana threaten him. Ms. Diana did not let Mr.
Ronald wherever. Mr. Ronald inadvertently hit Diana and her lover. her lover
died, Diana safe but her feet was limp. After Ms. Diana went, Mrs. Alicia came
near to her husband. Clara more shocked when she heard about their talking.
“Why
she always threaten you, honey?” said Mrs. Alicia.
“it
is all right, don’t worry,” said Mr. Ronald.
“Why
don’t we kill her, she is very disturbing us,”
“Alicia,
I want to talk about our relationship, I think it can not hep,”
“Try
it, but you will not get anything, all inheritance is mine. You can be
successful because of me,” said Mrs. Alicia “Don’t talking about it again.”
She
left her husband. Clara saw Mr. Ronald’s face. He looked so stressed. He want
to divorce to his wife, but he could not and he threaten by Ms. Diana. Ms.
Diana asked some money to him. he could not do anything, because if he refused
he would be in the prison.
Mr.
Kevin was alone in guest room. He was thinking about Micky. He afraid that
Micky would be know. Suddenly, he was attacked by someone. When Clara was
walking, she saw Micky in the guest room. Micky was looked Mr. Kevin unconscious.
Clara never saw Micky’s expression like that. Micky’s eyes looked full of
hatred. Then, Micky went out. Clara entered to that room, but Mr. Kevin not unconscious, he was
died. Clara screamed, Ken and Richard shocked. They ran to Clara’s voice.
“What’s going on?”
asked Richard.
“Mr. Kevin is died,”
answered Clara.
All people in that
villa also came to that room. They were shocked too.
“This is not accident,
but the murder,” said Ken.
The next day, Clara
told Ken what she saw in that night. Ken did not believe if Micky had killed
Mr. Kevin. Richard suspected perhaps they that invited by Micky there was
relation to Micky’s father death. Ken did not accepted if Micky took revenge to
his father’s death. The detective polices came to that villa, they were
suspected all people in that room. They watched the secret camera that set up
in every way. They only looked Mr. Kevin and Micky that entered to the guest
room. Clara also told that she saw Micky in venue. When the detective polices
asked Micky about that, Micky admitted it. Ken doubt what Micky was saying.
Only Micky did not have alibi and all the case showed that Micky was the
culprit. Ken suspected there is something wrong. The culprit was not Micky.
Perhaps, the culprit one of friend of Micky’s father.
“We should carry you
to police office to ask your other explanation,” said the detective police.
“Sir, wait a moment.
Micky impossible do that, I believe to Micky,” said ken.
“I know, we only ask
him some questions in police office, so all of you can wait in here,” he said
“don’t do anything.”
“Micky....,” said ken.
Micky did not speak
anything. He followed what the detective police asked.
“Don’t worry, we will
solve the case as soon as possible,” said Ken “I believe in you, Micky.”
Micky was carried by
the detective police. In the way, Micky suddenly took medicine and unconscious.
When the detective polices were panic, Micky ran away for them.
Ken asked to receptionist
where Mr. Ronald, Ms. Diana, and Mrs. Alicia. The receptionist told that they
came back to their houses. When Ken and friends were ran out, they saw Ms.
Diana was took her goods to her car.
“Ms. Diana, where are
you going?” asked Richard.
“I will back to my
villa. It near from here. Well, it is very unfortunate your friend suspected
had killed Mr. Kevin,” said Ms. Diana.
“I believe Micky did
not do that,” said Ken.
“ya, so do I,” said
Ms. Diana
“What are they?” asked
Clara.
“They are thermos bottle.
They are my make up, it usual for women bring them anywhere they go,” answered
Ms. Diana.
Ms. Diana left that
villa. Not long after that, Ken accepted the phone that Micky ran away to the
forest. Clara and Richard more suspected that Micky was culprit. They were went
to the forest. There was a villa. They entered to that villa. They saw the
thermos bottles in the table. the thermos bottles looked familiar with Ms.
Diana has. When they arrived in a room, they found Ms. Diana had died. She
stabbed by someone. When Richard out from the room, he saw Micky. Richard
called him, but Micky ran away. Ken and Clara also out from the room.
“What happened?” asked
Clara.
“I see Micky, he just
ran away, Micky’s behaviour was very strange,” said Richard.
“No, Micky impossible
do that, Richard,” said Ken.
“But why he ran away?
Why he always in the crime’s place, Ken.. can you explain this all?” said
Richard.
“Richard is true. Why
he must ran? Why he does not tell us?” asked Clara.
“I am thinking about
that, maybe Micky has some reasons why he ran away. We just only wait until he
tell us. We must believe in him guys,” said Ken.
Ken ran to chase
Micky. In the forest, they found Mrs. Alicia’s corpse. They found the knife in
near Mrs. Alicia’s corpse. Ken felt there is very strange. What did Mrs. Diana
do in the forest and why there was a knife beside her. Ken got something. There
was left over one person. he was Mr. Ronald. Ken, Clara, and Richard came to
Mr. Ronald’s apartment. In there, Mr. Ronald was very surprised that Micky’s
friend came to his apartment.
“What do you want to
come to my apartment?” asked Mr. Ronald.
“Mr. Kevin, Ms. Diana,
and Mrs. Alicia.. they all have die,” said Ken.
“What? My wife has
die? Don’t joking children,” said Mr. Ronald.
“Do you want to
divorce with your wife, but she refused?” asked Clara “ and I know, you felt
disturbed by Ms. Diana, because she often threaten you, right?”
“and I ever heard you
have fight with Mr. Kevin in the toilet. Both of you talking about the profit
in your company. So, you have reasons to kill them,” said Richard.
“Wait, you can not
decide I am a culprit just your own analysis,” said Mr. Ronald “What your proof
about that?”
“Maybe, you have throw
all proof,” said Ken “you know my friend have suspect because of that.”
“Micky? Aah, he also
has a motive to kill us,” said Mr. Ronald.
“What do you mean?”
asked Clara.
Mr. Ronald was silent.
He made a cup of coffee. “he also has a motive, because we had killed her father,
no, but make her father to committed suicide” said Mr. Ronald. After he drunk it, he excuse to the toilet. In toilet, he did not out. Ken knocked out, but
not answered. Perhaps, Mr. Ronald had ran away from us. When Ken and Richard
would checked out, Mr. Ronald out from the toilet. He fell to Clara. Clara
screamed.
“Oi, Old man that have
not shame,” said Richard.
Mr. Ronald fell to his
chair. His face looked red, and his mouth remove the foam like poisoning. Ken
checked the pack of coffee. Ken found there were some feather. He remembered
that Mr. Kevin had told Micky that feather in the guest room are poison. Only Ken
and Micky knew about that. Ken was confused what’s on earth was going now. Why
all that showed that Micky was culprit. The people that suspected by Ken had
died. There was left over. He was Micky. Ken must asked Micky.
Micky hidden in a
place. In there, his grandfather met him. his name was Mr. Carlos
“Grandfa, what are you
doing in here?” asked Micky.
“to meet you, now you
know your friends have avoid you, they don’t believe you Micky,” said Mr.
Carlos.
“What should I do
Grandpa?” said Micky.
“Avoid them and back
to home, they also avoid you,” said Mr. Carlos.
His grandpa began to
hypnotize Micky.
“come here my
grandchild,” said Mr. Carlos.
Micky came near to his
grandfather and hug him.
“I am sorry grandpa,
now I will follow all what you want,” said Micky.
The next day, Ken
accepted a message from Micky. Micky invited them to come to villa. Ken, Clara,
and Richard met Micky in the guest room. Micky had already came, but he came
with Mr.Carlos.
“Micky, who is he?”
asked Clara.
“Mr. Carlos,” said
Richard.
“Why do you know him,
Richard?” asked Clara.
“I have been know him
for long days.. he well-known with his hypnotize,” said Richard.
“Hypnotyze?” said
Clara.
Ken smiled to Micky.
“Micky, where have you
been?” asked Ken.
“I have decide to
avoid you, I will back to my house,” said Micky
“Oi, what do you
mean?” said Richard.
“You know about legend concerning of this
room?” asked Mr. Carlos.
“if you open the dog
and snail doors in the same time, you can touch the imperial wrath of the
dragon” said Mr. Carlos “this is trap that was set by Micky’s father. When both
doors of this hall opened, the moment they’re closed once again. The trap will
be activated.”
Micky and Mr. Carlos
closed the doors in the same time. Suddenly, the clock in that room did no
stable.
“Micky..,” they said.
“If you open the wrong
door, this Villa will be enveloped in fire,” said Micky “Ken, would you try to
open this snail door? It is the best if you don’t. At the moment you open it,
all of you will be covered in flames, will you believe my words? you have 3
minutes.”
“Oi, Micky.. wait,”
said Richard.
“What should we do Ken,” said Clara.
Suddenly, Ken saw
liquid in that floor. He remembered that liquid same with the glass decoration
in that room. That liquid also same with that liquid in the thermos bottles’s
Ms. Diana.
“I know the truth
behind all of the Serial Murders,” said Ken.
“What?” said Richard.
Mr. Carlos was
bothered why Micky gave the clue to them. Micky said, perhaps they did not
believe what he said. They saw there was smoke in that villa.
“Maybe, they are open
the wrong door,” said Micky.
“Ya, Micky I am so
happy yo back to your house,” said Mr. Carlos.
“Ya grandpa,” said
Micky.
In Micky’s house,
Micky accepted a message that the villa was very well. What happened, why all
this was all right. They came back to that villa. The went to the guest room.
After they entered, Ken and others also entered.
“Micky, thank you,”
said Ken.
“oh, I also thank you
for believe in me,” said Micky.
“Micky, What’s wrong?”
asked Mr. Carlos.
“You thought that I
was Hypnotized by you, but you are wrong. I have learn to against your
hypnotized in my mind,” said Micky “I believe in Ken, he don’t break his
promise to believe to me.”
“we already know
behind the serial murders,” said Ken.
Ken and the others
explain that. The first crime, Mr. Kevin was victim. He died because he was
killed by Ms. Diana. The proof was that liquid in that floor and also because
that, Ken and friends knew which door that true to open. That smell of liquid
in that floor same with Ms. Diana’s has, and same with glass decoration that
before in front of the dog door. So that, they knew the dog door that the wrong
door to be opened.
The second crime, Ms.
Diana was a victim. She murdered by Mrs. Alicia. The proof was a knife in near
Mrs. Alicia body. The blood in that knife same with the Ms. Diana’s blood, and
Mrs. Alicia’ fingerprint had found. The reason why Mrs. Alicia killed Ms.
Diana, because Mrs. Alicia did not want Ms. Diana used to disturbing her
relationship with her husband. Unfortunately, she also died in forest.
The third crime, Mrs
Alicia was a victim. She killed by her husband. The proof that Mr. Ronald was
confessed that he killed her wife. He tired always curbed by his wife. The other
proof that his wedding ring fell to Mrs. Alicia shirt.
The fourth crime, Mr.
Ronald was a victim. In this case, firstly, Ken and the others did not know,
because all people had died. One left person was Micky. Apparently, Mr Kevin
killed Mr. Ronald. the proof was the feather in pack of coffee. Mr. Ronald
perhaps had known Mr. Ronald’s hobby. Drinking a coffee. So that, Mr. Kevin
could put the feather in that pack of coffee.
All the crimes that
happened were killed each other. This serial murders were plans by Mr. Carlos.
Mr. Carlos was a creator of the crimes. Ken and the others knew from Mr. Boy.
Mr. Boy told that Mr. Carlos was Mr. Dan’s friend. A long time ago, he was
betrayed by Mr. Dan, because all of his friends said that Mr. Carlos was the
culprit’s son. Mr. Dan could not any longer to be friend with Mr. Carlos.
Finally, Mr. Carlos followed his parents to be a criminal. He wanted his
grandchild, Micky also followed him. unfortunately, Micky always rejected
until now.
“grandfa, accept your
sin,” said Micky.
“that’s right Mr.
Carlos,” said Ken “However, your heart hurt by someone, but it's never too late
to change. Maybe your friend had made a mistake, but give him a chance to
explain all.”
“Micky you are lucky,
you have great friends that is very believed in you,” said Mr. Carlos.
Mr. Dan came to that
villa. He asked Ken and Friends to leave that room. He told to Mr. Carlos he
was very regretted had avoided Mr. Carlos. He should believe until end to his
friend. Mr. Carlos thought, it was too late. He did not accepted his sins in
the prison. He took some drugs and died.
Finally, Micky still
became part of the School detective with Ken and the others. He started a new
life with his friends. They must became a great detectives in the world.
